October assessment learner response

WWW: Good understanding of the camera shot used.                              grade: 3   marks:12/25       

-A good attempt at analysing how children are represented in the media with some analysis on effect.

LR- more detailed analysis with much more key terminology to gain higher marks

-Revise denotation.

Q1. no marks. I didn't get this question because i mistook it for connotations when it was actually denotations.

Q2. 1

Q3. 1 (out of 2) I did not get full marks on this question because I didn't mention much about the producers and how they can be a group or a individual.

Q4. 1 (out of 2) I did not get full marks on this question because of how I didnt talk about the demographic type they are.

Q5. 1 (out of 2) I didn't go into deep analysis on why so I lost a mark

Q6. 1 (out of 3) I lost two marks for i did not notice a lot of important information proving it is a film poster and I did not have full knowledge and understanding of the topic.

Q7. 1 (out of 2) I was not going into full detail and didn't realise all of the connotations for the environment around the child and the meaning of his facial expression

Q8. 2 (out of 4)  I didn't get the question fully right because i didn't have full understanding of theoretical frame work and not the appropriate terminology to get more marks.

Q9. 4 (out of 8) I was not able to get full marks for I didn't have the best appropriate and effective use of terminology, I also don't have the full knowledge of why the advertisers use children in particular.

I need to use better terminology.

My strongest question was number 9. I did better on this question because I put a lot more detail and showed more understanding of the question.

My weakest question was number 6. I did worse on this question then any other because I didn't put a lot of effort into the question and stopped after saying 2 reasons on how we know its a movie, making me lose 2 marks.

Q9. (re-draft)

The reasons charities use pictures of children in advertising is to make the consumers feel sympathetic, this also makes the consumer want to come to the persons aid in some way and the only way they can do this is through water aid.

Also the facial expression of the child shows he has been suffering and adults wont like children suffering because they themselves might have children and would never want them to be in a position like the child in the advert.